Writing :: What happens at 15k words?
Once I reach about 15,000 words in a manuscript, I’m usually into Chapter 4 (sometimes only 3, but not usually). Anyway, that’s when I go back and figure out if I started off my characters right, opened with a solid teaser and have shown my plot and given my main characters a goal. Often, I find I haven’t! Darn it!
Since I refuse to go further into the book without having set the stage for my peeps, I gotta go back. So often, I find the time it takes me to go from 15k to 20k is faster because I’m front filling the story line. (No, I don’t wait until I’m done with the book to do this because then I could be completely off tangent).
Given I’m now on book 5 (though with 5 others left to file 13) and I love this story, I’m highly motivated to go back in and make sure all this is there. If I’m not, then it seems the story doesn’t flow as well.
I find it interesting that I’ve done this for each of my four other manuscripts at this stage. Do you have a placeholder spot that gives you the same pause but then spurs on the story further?
Not sure I have written enough long stuff to have a particular spot, but I have re-written chapters 1 – 3 of my current one because they were nagging at me for more content and backstory so that later chapters and character motivations make more sense. The rewrite happened after ch 8 – and probably has more to do with procrastinitis than discipline.
For shorts, my usualy medium, it just flows to the end, then I edit.
Shorts are great for exactly that reason … they are ‘short’! 😉 LOL
I probably should but I write the whole thing then determine if it still fits with where the story ended up going. I often completely rewrite the beginning at that point or, more frequently, lop off the first few chapters because that wasn’t the best starting place for the story.
Oh such a waste of good writing … in the lopping off of. 😉 Or save that for the sequel. 😉
I used to write, start to finish, no pause for breath, and only afterward scour through for crappy writing. Now I’m more of a perfectionist and can’t move forward unless each paragraph is as good as I can get it without a second eye. The negative of this: I write much slower and produce less. The positive of this: My work is much better quality than it used to be and I have far less editing to do. I also have a horrid habit of reading back through what I wrote the day before, before I can start writing to add to it. This, too, has it downside: by the time I complete it, I’ve read the opening about 30 times (because I go way back to the beginning until I decide it’s simply to far to go back), which then leaves me wondering if the opening is as half-decent as I initially thought. I doubt I’ll change how I work, but it does irritate the hell out of me.
I go back, too. I re-read a previous ch. before I start the next to make sure I’m still going where I think I should be going. 🙂 By the time I reach the end though, the last chapter gets a cursory review and the first has been looked a zillion times I’m so over and done with the opening. 🙂
Ah the quirks we have. 😉