Book Review : Dead until Dark

Yeah, yeah, yeah … I’m way late to the game. But I don’t have HBO and wasn’t, honestly, all that interested in vampire stories. In all the stuff I’ve written, I only have a vamp in one story … so you can see, it’s not my ‘area’.

Anyway … every time I ask for suggestions on a book, I get the ‘You’ve got to read the Sookie Stackhouse series” also known as True Blood from HBO … or rather the tv show is based on the books (way way cool!).

And so, the other day, as I stood in line to buy Hunger Games, there was Dead until Dark by Charlaine Harris and I picked it up figuring I “might as well get on with it already”.

I’ll admit, I was not sucked into the first couple of chapters. Not sure why, but it was slow going … and then it shot off like a rocket ship. Sure there is all sorts of stuff in it that are my writing pet-peeves and elements of style that as a budding writer myself I’m told to never to do … ever, ever, ever. Can I just repeat that I’m told never to do these things? :) But I digress.

And the setting in Louisiana, I couldn’t get a handle on the names and the way people were responding to each other, but as the story progressed and I learned the characters more, I found I understood them. Didn’t mean I always liked them.

For example, I’m Type A personality, go-go-go, competitive and always looking for the next opportunity. Sookie is ‘happy’ in her job as a waitress. If that’s where I’d been with my personality, I’d have owned the bar in a matter of years. I don’t understand a lack of “drive” very well … which is probably why most of my characters are a bit competitive and some very aggressive. Sookie’s got ‘issues’ that I can’t relate to as well — paranormal issues. But, of course thats the kind of stuff I love to read about and write about and I love how she deals with them, adjusts to them.

There are a few ‘points’ made in the book that I wish weren’t there. I cannot stand story lines or arcs that involved the molestation of children. No, it’s not a big part of this book, but it is an element of back story and I wish it wasn’t. These are the kinds of things that as a writer, they help make the personalities of our characters and it’s a lot easier to write than to read (at least for me).

I think it’s funny how she’s played the vampire as virus method to mainstreaming. Absolutely hilarious. So many scenes I had to laugh at because I could imagine them playing out in my mind.

Guess that’s why this one got picked up for tv. :)

So yes, despite my mostly-stay-away-from-vampires philosophy, it was a great read and I will likely, pick up another. :)

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Flash Fiction :: Life’s Treasure

A couple times a year, Jason Evans who runs The Clarity of Night blog, posts a picture and hundreds of people write stories based on the picture in 250 words or less.

I’ve participated in the last two and this time … again. The difference with this entry is that I actually, finally, got into his ‘Forties Club‘ with my entry titled:Life’s Treasure.

I’m very excited about it and want you to read it on his blog, so I’m not going to post the story here until I find out if it’s placed/won/just gotten some good views. :)

Go take a look … at mine … at others and enjoy some very short … very very short … stories. :)

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Book Review : Summer’s Child

I’ve spent the last few weeks (only slow because I only got about 1/2 hour a day to read) reading Diane Chamberlain’s Summer’s Child.

i’ve wanted to read one of her stories because she’s a North Carolina author and her settings are places that I know … sometimes really well. This story, set in Kill Devil Hills, I do know. Hubby and I flew into KDH in a four-seater airplane together one day for an outing together and ended up spending time at the Wright Brother’s Memorial and to a couple other places even.

The story is about a child found on the beach by a young girl. The child is raised by said young girls’ family and after the first chapter, the story is present day with the baby as a 22 year old and the young girl all grown up herself.

As a romance, I expected more romance… not necessarily steamy stuff, but between the two main players. It wasn’t until 90% of the story was over and one with that he finally figured out what he wanted and honestly, I didn’t really buy into it. It sounded forced … like an ‘aha’ moment that took 35 years to figure out.

The story repeated a lot, too. Meaning, we’d see a scene, the next would be similar/the same with different characters. The reason was that Rory (main guy) was looking into the matter of the baby found on the beach 22 years before, so sure, it had to show the progression of him finding stuff out. From Rory’s perspective I got that.

From Daria’s, her hesitation in letting Rory go on and on without saying something to him irked me. She’s this strong, caring, not overly sensitive woman. She lives on her own, cares for her “younger” sister, worked as an EMT, but is (during the story) not doing so due to some issues. So she is conflicted and conflicting in the story. It makes me wonder if people really do hold back their feelings this much of if we, as the writer of the story, make them do that? Why not just put them together, then insert problems? The non-admittance of so many romances just get to me.

Daria is a strong woman. She reminds me a number of friends of mine who I know could live independently if ever they had to. She’s tough, willing, industrious. She’s a teacher, a friend and full of character. She’s definitely the best part of the story, outside of the younger sister. I only wish there was more to the relationship she had with Rory because I would have like to have read the romance between the two, rather than all the investigation into the appearance of the baby.

The flip side — Grace’s story arc — was fantastic. It was a great parallel storyline, but the Grace-Rory almost relationship remained until nearly 80% of the story was done.

Sure, Daria and Rory knew each other as kids, but to jump into a relationship without more of the time to build it between then? I wish there was more… so much more.

But that’s me. I love a good story, but I also want the relationships to build … to survive problems, for the characters to conquer their problems together and apart … there just wasn’t a ‘together’ until the end.

The twist with the parentage in this one was one I didn’t expect. :) That was great because I’m good at seeing what’s coming and sometimes in books it’s so obvious I stop reading. Not here. Did not see that one coming. So, major kudos on that one.

Would I recommend it? Absolutely. It’s less suspenseful than books I normally read, but it was a good sweet story and as its set on the beach … so a week at the beach with this book in hand? Oh yeah. The perfect combination. :)

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Blog Chain :: Make the bad guy sound nice (July AW)

Hmmm … how exactly to do that? Well this month, that’s the challenge and I, along with my other fellow blog chain participants have a huge task ahead of us. We’ve worked tirelessly to make our bad guys bad, and now we have to make them look nice? Or rather, show them in a sympathetic light. Now you tell me … have I succeeded?

The blog chain comes from Absolute Write, a writers forum in which I participate on and off.

Before me went Mariekeme and after me is Fokker Aeroplanbau. The rest of the chain is below.

Let me get started then. I write paranormal romance so in that, you only need to know that there is some group of my characters with otherworldly abilities. That doesn’t mean that all my characters have these abilities. As a matter of fact, usually only a very small subset of folks have those “extra’s”. Sometimes though, someone finds out and despite their attempts to thwart the supernatural, the good guys win. I mean, they have to in my world. It’s called the Happily Ever After. :)

So, here, meet Julie. Julie is officially, the bad guy in Little White Lies. Julie is motivated by a number of factors, a long-term grudge (since we all know women are good at that), jealousy, greed and a strong desire to eliminate the competition though it’s 18 years after the initial event has occurred.

Well, Julie has been taken away, in cuffs, after she’s been caught ‘red-handed’ as the old saying goes and since that ‘ends’ the story, sort of, I decided I’d show you a bit of her interrogation by the police (which is not in the book). Little White Lies is written from Charley and Wyatt’s perspectives and this is no different, except that Charley is on the other side of a two-way mirror.

One thing to note about Julie though … she’s a master manipulator. ;)

Detective Kyle pulled out a chair opposite of where Julie sat, her hands cuffed in front of her. She straightened her shoulders and shook her hair which hung to her shoulders in soft waves, a heady contrast to the stark white room and silver table.

“Now, Ms. Bland, I understand from the witness statements that you and ah, Wyatt, the victim, severed your relationship nearly twenty years prior, is that correct?”

“He wouldn’t have left me if –”

“Answer the question, please.”

“I’m trying to.” She seethed through the statement, firmed her lips and drew a breath. “I’m sorry. This is just all a bit overwhelming. I’ve never been inside a prison before.”

“This isn’t a prison.”

A visible shiver ran through her upper torso. “I’ll do as you ask, sir. You’re correct, I haven’t seen Wyatt in almost twenty years.”

“Your husband,” the Detective shuffled some paperwork, “indicates you were the mastermind behind the entire scheme.”

“That lying pig.” Julie closed her eyes. “Again, my apologies.” She opened them again, stared at the mirror, a hint of a smile hidden behind a mask of despair. “He hurt me, emotionally, over the years. I’ll accept the title of a mastermind, if I must, but of nothing malicious.” The cuffs clanged against the metal table. “I didn’t have my hands in any part of what my husband or my sisters did. I swear it.”

“And yet you were there when we arrived.”

She laid her hands on the table, dropped her forehead to them. When she rose again, a sheen of tears glossed her eyes. “I was. He made me go. He said I had to confront my demons.”

“Your demons.”

She nodded, a single tear made it way down her cheek. “For twenty years I’ve suffered, struggled and watched as everyone around me excelled. I tried to keep up, but I couldn’t. Even in high school, the guys only looked at my body. When I met my husband, he showed me how important it was to break free of those bonds, so that I could grow into the woman I really am. He told me I could be more.”

“And thus you participated in the activities of the week and evening.”

She shook her head, squeezed her eyes shut. “Don’t they say that the bad guys always leave a fingerprint on a crime scene? Well, mine aren’t there, because like I said, I was only in it at the end — to let my own issues go. That’s part of all twelve step programs, too, you know. I have a therapist, she’ll tell you the same.”

More papers shuffled. “In these documents, all parties involved point to you as the–”

Another tear fell. “Ever since I was a kid, no one has believed in me. I thought my husband did. I thought my father did. And now you don’t. I should give up now.” She held out her wrists. “Just take me to prison, wherever that is. Lock me up. Throw away the key. My life is over anyway, whether or not you continue to question me since I have no friends to help me.” She sniffed, wiped her nose with the back of her hand. “There’s never hope when everyone is against you.”

Charley crossed her arms over her chest, stared at Julie through the glass. “She’s right you know?” Wyatt put his arm around her. “It starts in childhood and builds. Unless someone snuffs it out?” Charley shook her head. “It ends right here.”

And there is Julie’s motivation. So the key question is … is she, or isn’t she … lying. :)

Do be sure to check out other fellow blog chain participants!
CScottMorris
Aheïla
AuburnAssassin
DavidZahir
IrishAnnie
Anarchicq
Proach
devero
bri ness
hillaryjacques
LadyMage
M.R.J. Le Blanc
Mariekeme <--Before
aimeelaine <-- Me
Fokker Aeroplanbau <-- After
Irissel
CowgirlPoet
Collectonian
Alpha Echo
cryaegm

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Published! :: New Kids, Old Tricks

I wrote this article for CIRCA Magazine and it was published in their July issue, along with a super fantastic photograph (if I must say … and I must).

New Kids, Old Tricks

If you want to see the article as it’s printed, pick up a copy at one of their locations! It’s a free magazine!

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Writing :: Finished Novel #4

Yes indeedy, I finished my fourth novel. Granted it’s 1st draft quality and will require much editing, as they always do, but to finish is a great accomplishment, one I am both grateful to get to do and excited about.

This one, called Hide and Seek is, of course, my new favorite. I finished at 99,156 words which in page-count (like the size of a paperback that you’d buy from Target?) is about 397 pages. Yes, that will be cut down in editing, but it all had to be written to be edited.

When I look back on what I’ve learned in the course of writing, it’s tremendous. I can’t thank my friends enough for their constructive criticism that pushed me to better writing and better storytelling. Without them, I’d have done the same thing over and over, but I don’t anymore and that makes my 1st drafts closer to 2nd drafts in much needed 3rd and 4th draft formats. ;)

Where to now? Novel #5 of course. When I started writing last May I thought I’d come up with one story and that would be it. Apparently, my head is full. So while Lexi and Tripp have reached their romantic end (and let me say that the end of Hide and Seek is my ultimate favorite to-date) Cassie and Zach need to get back moving. They’re sitting waiting for me to pull them from a really bad dinner date. :)

Where are you with your writing? What accomplishments have you reached today?

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Book Review : Fantasy in Death

I’m a big fan of the J.D. Robb (aka Nora Roberts) ‘In Death” series. I’ve read every single one and own a copy of each … paperback versions from way back when and hard back now. They are part of my library.

In any case, Fantasy in Death did not disappoint.

Back were Dallas and Roarke who I swear I’d want to meet if they were real people. Peabody, McNab and Feeney, a smidge of Bella and Mavis and Nadine, oh! and Dr. Mira. So the whole cast.

The entire series is based on Eve Dallas’ word as a cop in the New York Police and Security Department — she’s a Homicide Lieutenant. The books are always full of surprises, inspiration, revelation and of course some steaminess.

This one didn’t have nearly the steam, stuck well and solid to the investigation.

I’m okay with that because J.D. (aka Nora) can weave the twists and turns from the start to the finish and all along, we go with her and can learn the whodunnit as she does, though Lt. Eve always knows it way ahead of time.

In this book, Eve is faced with some serious electronics work and relies heavily on her team to figure it out — which is kind of cool, though she’s still a main and key player.

We also really see her soft side with Roarke, or I did at least. She doesn’t show it often, when she does, it’s heartfelt. Gotta love her!

So without giving further pause, I say read this one too because while it’s not much about relationship dynamics this one is a great story on the investigation and I thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

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Writing :: 9 questions for Lexi Shepherd

You don’t know Lexi, but I do. She’s my newest (well sorta) character in my newest (well sorta, too) novel. This list of 9 questions popped into my email via Writer’s Digest newsletter today and it inspired me to think about my characters a bit and how they would respond.

Since I’m in a 2@1 project and about 33k into each, I really need to KNOW my characters right now, otherwise, I need to go back and retool. I think I’m still learning Cassie Miller (Late Bloomers) which leads me to wonder what I need to retweak in her story. But Lexi now, I’ve got her in my head and so with her I will stick for a while.

Consider this a little interview with me asking the questions and Lexi answering them. Get the questions and more information from the link above.

1. How do you learn best?
By doing. I’m hands on, completely.

2. How open are you to new ideas and information?
Given I’m in a career funk right now, very open. I want to try something new, to stretch my mental capacity and edge into the grey areas of what my abilities will do.

3. When you walk into a party, what do you notice first?
The smell. If it stinks, it’s not worth staying.

4. Is one sense more highly developed than another?
Ha! Duh. But I can’t tell you what. That would give away my secret.

5. Do you usually notice problems around you?
Depends on the people. In close quarters, yes. Someone across the room, not so much.

6. Would you say you are an optimist or a pessimist?
Depends on the situation. When it comes to myself? Pessimist. Everyone else? Optimist.

7. Are you more interested in the past, the future or living in the now?
I’m SO over the past. The now is teetering on the edge of driving me insane. Bring on the future.

8. How do you decide if you can trust someone?
They earn trust in their actions and reactions.

So there is some very cryptic answers from Lexi. Morgan Prince could answer these, too and so could Charley Randall. Might have to dive into that.

Got a character that you know so well you can both ask and answer the questions as them? :) Post a link in the comments with your character interview.

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Writing :: ‘no-no’ word list

A friend once said my first drafts look like 2nd or 3rd drafts and while I got to clap happily at that notation, it’s not for lack of trying, as the expression goes. In fact it’s probably because of one little list that I have ingrained in my head. Worse, that list grows as I learn, adjust and practice.

What is my list of ‘no-no’ words? Well, these are words that generally are considered ‘bad’ in writing, or passive, those that are filler words, telling words or way-over used words.

Do I forget? Of course! Sometimes, I’ll go back through a draft and see ten mistakes in the first page worth of edits, but at least, if I keep these in mind while I write and stop, think and retool a sentence as write that 1st draft, the edits come out that much better.

I know there are those of the school of thought “Write now, edit later” but honestly, I can’t do that. I prefer to write well the first time and save on editing.

So, here is my list.

Telling
look, watch, hear, see, felt

Filler
just, quick

Any word that ends in -ly
Any word that ends in -ing

Weak verbs
was, were

Passive verbs
had, let, be (and all iterations)

Present tense mixers
this, now

I mean it when I say I will stop and rewrite. My brain will cease to function in the middle of a sentence (usually) when I pull up those works … EXCEPT (isn’t there always a but?) in dialog because people talk in all those bad ways.

Now if I’m writing casually, I break all my own rules. It’s only when I’m in my Scrivener application, writing in a dedicated story, or for an article for the paper or magazine that I work this way, so don’t think I’m perfect by any stretch of the imagination. :)

What other words are on your ‘no-no’ list?

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Writing :: Why paranormal?

As a writer/author-wanna-be, I often think about the genre that I write in and wonder if I should try something else. The answer is ‘yes’ and ‘no’ because I love the paranormal.

Per dictionary.com:
par·a·nor·mal
   /ˌpærəˈnɔrməl/ Show Spelled[par-uh-nawr-muhl]
–adjective
of or pertaining to the claimed occurrence of an event or perception without scientific explanation, as psychokinesis, extrasensory perception, or other purportedly supernatural phenomena.

So, maybe if I understand it more, I’ll see why I like it so much.

As I see it, understand, and write it, paranormal, in literature, is life as we know it, but with the twist of the above definition. So, a vampire that lives a normal life among humans (you know the book(s)), or to pull a more common analogy — Superman. Think about it … he’s a supernatural phenomena within the context of ‘real life’.

For me, I combine the paranormal with romance because I thoroughly enjoy dissecting the evolution of a relationship between two people.

Where I diverge from many is that normal people are just … so … normal. :) So the use of the paranormal allows me to play with stuff a normal human couldn’t otherwise do, like see the future, turn invisible, shape-shift, that kind of thing.

But in the context of ‘real’ like because I don’t want to build a world that is complete fantasy. I like to use scenery that I know, live in, see every day, towns I’ve lived in, and houses even. That, combined with the crazy leads me to stories.

For example, in Mystic Therapy, Morgan Prince — the main character — is a psychotherapist to all creatures mythological. Real, combined with unreal.

What is your favorite genre to write in and why?

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